“Roses”

“Roses”

Roses for longevity, yes! tokens of a former reign
And deep within their sacrifice reds and florist’s greens,
Are fragrances of time and place from passing scenes
Of nuance, puddles deposited from accidents and incidental rains,
And that was yesterday; tomorrow, a torrent drowning visions—
Foundlings of future stories—deliverance in blessings saved
For half a century and more, prescient tokens, brave,
Benign and lacking only guile to cut the ribbons
Of what’s left of reticence. There are dangers in the cellophane.
Please! If this then that; if inertia, stimulation
Then, of course, the sum and price of abnegation;
What the Greeks call horses, the Trojans, lethal gains.
Intentions swept aside, abandoned, rapture’s secrecy
Is hidden virtue confused with common sense and mediocrity.

5 responses to ““Roses”

  1. Sometimes you’re as hard to fathom as Emily Dickinson…

  2. Emily Dickinson (1830–86). Complete Poems. 1924.

    Part One: Life

    II

    OUR share of night to bear,
    Our share of morning,
    Our blank in bliss to fill,
    Our blank in scorning.

    Here a star, and there a star, 5
    Some lose their way.
    Here a mist, and there a mist,
    Afterwards—day!

  3. *Love* it !!

    In my copy of her poems, the years and total poems are:

    1858 – 51
    1859 – 93
    1860 – 63
    1861 – 85
    1862 – 366
    1863 – 140
    1864 – 172
    1865 – 84

    I’ve always found the peak in her output being near the Declaration of Baha’u’llah a curious coincidence. Also, the poems in ’62 & ’63 have more spiritual power, to me….

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    • I just now read your comment because it apparently was put into the “spam” box for whatever the reasons. Pardon the delay.

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